The accomplishment section was a good idea, since that can pertain to anything. Your designs are good, but they don't really tell the viewer anything about you (clearly the content will, but design-wise the viewer can't see who you are).
I think your strongest template was your last one. However maybe consider moving your contact over to the right inside the box with your name and leave some empty space in the top left, making that box in the top right more of a rectangle that reaches out more to the left?
Hey John - what you're saying is good; make sure to not include yourself in the critique - do not post these assessments in the first person. Edit / rewrite this to follow the instructions of the assignment.
Hey Claire - off to a decent start. And hoping this comment doesn't disappear like the last one! I was saying that your designs need to be better explored; they are all based on one idea, with slight changes, and if these are to develop into your final, there are questions about the scarcity of content and design. We may discuss this in class on Wednesday.
The accomplishment section was a good idea, since that can pertain to anything. Your designs are good, but they don't really tell the viewer anything about you (clearly the content will, but design-wise the viewer can't see who you are).
ReplyDeleteGood assessment, Jenna - agree; the thumbnails are all based on a single idea and could be better explored.
DeleteI think your strongest template was your last one. However maybe consider moving your contact over to the right inside the box with your name and leave some empty space in the top left, making that box in the top right more of a rectangle that reaches out more to the left?
ReplyDeleteHey John - what you're saying is good; make sure to not include yourself in the critique - do not post these assessments in the first person. Edit / rewrite this to follow the instructions of the assignment.
DeleteHey Claire - off to a decent start. And hoping this comment doesn't disappear like the last one! I was saying that your designs need to be better explored; they are all based on one idea, with slight changes, and if these are to develop into your final, there are questions about the scarcity of content and design. We may discuss this in class on Wednesday.
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